Review Detail of Hana11355603 in Reincarnated as A Lonesome Teenage Boy

The writing and grammar are just kinda bad. The scenes and settings blend together and I can’t always tell if we changed locations or how fast time is moving. I feel bad that the first review for this book is a negative one. But I would recommend to the author to describe the setting so the readers know where we are and what’s happening. If you’re changing the scene let us know. Use a break or something. Just fill out your writing a bit more bc all the scenes were moving really fast. And I would recommend getting someone to proofread or edit your work.