This story can be great. The updates are to slow. Its been 11 week since this story started and the story is still in the prologue. Either the chapters have to get longer or the updates have to come faster. The pace is just to slow for me.
JaceKendrix
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LIKECould you restart the story? You make the chapters short; publish a single chapter per day for twenty days, then three or seven chapters per week and finally two chapters per week.
JaceKendrix:Thank you for the review.