Review Detail of lord_dark in Infinite Mana in the Mage Academy

This is my review. 1- The novel is very fast from level 0 to level 3 in thirteen chapters. 2- There are no difficulties in his life learning his spell with ease, I understand the author put the tag overpowered, but this tag expresses the strength of the character in his level and not in all his life of studying love etc. .3- The magic system is frankly weak. You could have followed the magic system in the novel (A Wizard's Secret) and made it difficult to raise the level, and the protagonist's abilities is infinite magic he try testing his magic in several ways to find the best way to rise to a higher level . 4- There is no character building that makes the character feel boring There is nothing special about him such as (1) Does he love knowledge and he has nothing but knowledge in his eyes. 2- Is his personality loving or ruthless. 3- Is his personality weak and getting stronger in The future, or that his character is strong from the beginning. 4- Is he a clever or a fool, etc.) 5- The world is all usual, nothing new, i don't feel any enthusiasm for this world The tiger is the same tiger in a larger size if the author sets strange and dangerous creatures as an example of a creature It looks like a diamond, but it has an eye on every side, and when you look at it, you get crazy , the world would be interesting. 6- And this is the most important point for me. There is no big or small goal in the novel trying to become strong for the sake of becoming strong, no more or less and system are trash in general that corrupts the narrative, especially if there is a store feature in it. ......... (I hope my words are not too harsh, but that's how I felt when I read your novel)