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2023-12-14 09:14

pretty fucking good, I'm not a fan of him hiding his power during latest chapters, and to be honest his growth and strength in general is lower than it should be but i digress. Hm

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An incredible novel Author! I highly commend you for writing it all for free! So, first is the writing quality, which, honestly, is just ok. Although it is better than most other novels on the platform, there is a consistent amount of typos and grammar mistakes on each chapter. So, it's not the best, but not the worst either, a solid 4 stars. Second is stability of updates. This is probably the worst part of the author's writing, because his updating is so slow. I'm literally dying out here author, and you're just taking your time to torture me slowly. But all jokes aside, the stability of updates is really bad for Webnovel, as, although the novel was featured, the stability of updates will make it so that the Webnovel algorithm favors other novels, just because they update more often. If you, the author, wants to get more popular, then you're gonna need to increase that update rate. So, with all things considered, I gave this a 4, should have been a three, but, I gave it a 4, probably cause I like this novel so much and don't want the ratings to dip. Next is the story development. Arghhhh! This sucks! But again, I have to give it a four. I really wanted to give this a 5, but you just had to rush the whole living in the noble family part. Honestly I really wanted him to build relationships with his family, and maybe have somebody that he wasn't cold around, just so that he could have better character development. Yeah, I'm pretty sure this story needs some fluff, whether it be with his lover or with his family, you decide, it's just to balance out the coldness of the story. All of my feelings aside, I really did feel like you had rushed the first arc. Fourth is character development, which, honestly, there isn't any right now for the MC, so, I just gave it four stars. Yeah, sure, there were the parts where he was gaining power and such, but his emotional and mental state never really changed, it just reverted back to his original personality from Earth or whatever that place was. On the other hand, with the MC's sister, the character development was just really good. I mean, I actually wished that you had expanded on it, cause you only wrote a few paragraphs, at most a chapter on it. There was a lot of potential here, and I just think that you've missed it. On that note, I'll also be waiting for the MC's character development, cause, I'm excited for what you'll come up with. Finally, there's world background. Gave it a four, just because it's pretty generic. Not that much to say about it, except, I'll be waiting for the moment you make it unique in your own way. Overall, this is an extremely amazing novel. Even though I had to give it all 4 stars, because it never excelled in any of the 5 Webnovel characteristics, I still love this novel, because it's just fking great! I mean, the ideas and the conflicts the MC faces captivated me, and, it kept me turning the pages. (Well, in this case, scrolling down.) This is a novel that I would definitely recommend to any friend or other reader out there Really good work author!

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