Review Detail of AuthorSven in Monarch of Gluttony: System of Sin
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I haven't read this but only 1chapter saying he got jailed because for one small mistake and that is taking food in sin of pride. first of all it is her fault that he get food just because he's hungry and that only means ya know he's selfish of course the sin of pride has its own pride do you think the king of pride will let share food in a mere workers and that he jailed and has so much hatred into sin of pride because just single mistake... Hays nvm I hate the mc even the introduction
Monarch of Gluttony: System of Sin
Izekiel
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So you're that kind of Author, huh? I wouldn't be surprised If you haven't already deleted a bunch of other reviews that contain constructive criticism.
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I was saying exactly truth bruh... I mean it was common sense a sin of pride has their own pride that mortal can know and sometimes mortal just turn blind eyes just like you create character the MC. the mc eat one of the food of sin of pride and got jailed because he ate food. and mc was just like I ATE A SINGLE FOOD JUST A SINGLE OF PIECE OF FOOD BECAUSE IM HUNGRY AND THIS IS WHAT I GET AFTER WORKING FOR A LONG TIME. I mean he was just a member and not important member into group/guild so yeah and mc is angry because he feel like he didn't do anything wrong just single mistake but it was infront of leader and worst part he has title of sin of pride I mean it was so obvious... So yeah it's look like you have years of reading experience too but not much maybe you read too much Chinese novel and got influence into one of the story you liked and copy them and to not make it obvious you change the genre like Korea novel A novel type: Towers it's was obvious it was like the tower appeared nowhere and the humanity is about to go extinction and suddenly the mana Or either level system appeared and the human fight back and after few years the mc appeared average and got suddenly heaven defying luck or treasure or something old man teaching him and many more... It was obvious story.. I mean author as a otaku you should write your own story I mean not copy them and the worst part you written the story is you copy at the sametime Chinese novel and Korea novel
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well I kinda hate the character and so what I am reader and I am giving the reviews and just saying true because I hate the character like that even many of readers and as I expected what you will said... And to tell you the truth there is no point about this discussion because it will be me will lose if it is about trash talking so yeah you win.
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