Review Detail of H2Oz_Anxious in The Werewolf CEO's Pet

The story starts with a hot scene making readers wonder about the whole character. Though the writing is good, there are some small mstakes with commas and line separation. The world building is good but it would be even better to go a bit more into details to 'show' and not just tell. The work is unique with werewolf and CEO, two famous tags of webnovel. The work will improve with time and I believe the author can do it, I especially like strong FML so seeing more of miss CEO won't be any bad~.