The basic themes and plot of the story is very interesting. I love sci fi and the superhero stuff, but the writing style was not really what I am used to. And I read a lot so this made it harder for me to keep up. In certain scenes, further researching can be very helpful. But these are just my thoughts, all the best for future (ﾉ◕ヮ◕)ﾉ*.✧

the story is amazing. its developed in a very intersting way and the idea of script writing format is amazing.its enhances your story more.

The story was amazing. The way you developed the story was very unique and unlike any other writing style. Despite its script format, I thoroughly enjoyed the story. As you mentioned in the auxiliaries, the writing style will soon change in volume two, because I understand what you're trying to accomplish in volume one, and I like it. I'm excited to see how the story progresses in volume two. Your description of the characters is very informative and gives me an idea of how they look. Excellent work, author.[img=recommend]

I really like the script format of it, it's very easy to read and it hasn't been an idea I've thought of for some reason. The story developement is very good and at its best.

This novel has a lot of potential. It's interesting and unique. Though the writing style is something I'm not use to. And it's not good to dump information in one go. But nevertheless this is an interesting read.

One of the more uniqu stories out there. Paying homage to Doctor Who and with a bit of Stephen King’s The Dark Tower series, we are presented with a tale that’s familiar yet comforting and intriguing at the same time.

Nice story.... This author really has a good potential l must say..... And what l can say about his writting skill, its really really good..... Keep going author...... I am really impressed by u....

I see a lot of potential here just after reading the first couple chapters. The unique way the dialogue is written is very attention grabbing. It's not what most authors do, and I think its an excellent style that is very similar to movie scripts which really helps push your imagination. I hope the author will continue leaning into that! The world is also VERY interesting and EXTREMELY unique, but in my opinion more time needs to be spent easing us into it. Its very jarring to go from one idea or concept to another with so little time in between. As a reader I like more time to invest in an interesting concept and having so many interesting concepts thrown at me one right after the other is very overwhelming.

I like this story from the bit I read specifically chapter 2, you have fun little dialogue, and the writing style is something I'm familiar, since I also started that way, I see keep on writing using dialogue if you want, it makes the story very unique, but if you want to change it that's also an option you could take, either way keep writing.