The story has potential, but please make the character more bold. I mean let him show what he got and just leave a few trump cards. MC tries to hide his talent because he dont want attention but him betting able to use magic again is already eye catching so having insta cast or just fast casting at the start wont make a difference.. making mc trying to pretend to be weak is just breaking the character development
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