it is nice story with usual progressions toward the world building. But there are some detailed elements/situation that are un-found in other stories, rather becomes a hassle while reading.
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LIKETo be honest, if i simply skip through the details, the story would be bland(just like it was before—According to my readers) Those details help readers visualize the scene, it gives them a picture But if it’s really getting too much, i would improve and make it better Thanks for your Review!! [img=recommend]
Gladstone_:To be honest, if i simply skip through the details, the story would be bland(just like it was before—According to my readers) Those details help readers visualize the scene, it gives them a picture But if it’s really getting too much, i would improve and make it better Thanks for your Review!! [img=recommend]