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Review Detail of Black_Knight_4422 in Manaless Mage

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Black_Knight_4422
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it is nice story with usual progressions toward the world building. But there are some detailed elements/situation that are un-found in other stories, rather becomes a hassle while reading.

Manaless Mage

Gladstone_

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Gladstone_
Gladstone_AuthorGladstone_

So you feel some parts are too… detailed?

Gladstone_
Gladstone_AuthorGladstone_

To be honest, if i simply skip through the details, the story would be bland(just like it was before—According to my readers) Those details help readers visualize the scene, it gives them a picture But if it’s really getting too much, i would improve and make it better Thanks for your Review!! [img=recommend]

Timz11
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When you gonna update

Gladstone_:To be honest, if i simply skip through the details, the story would be bland(just like it was before—According to my readers) Those details help readers visualize the scene, it gives them a picture But if it’s really getting too much, i would improve and make it better Thanks for your Review!! [img=recommend]
Gladstone_
Gladstone_AuthorGladstone_

Sorry boss, new chap has been updated

Timz11:When you gonna update