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XXgamer_98
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Writing Quality is pretty bad. A lot of the same words are used in the same paragraph to continue the sentences. For ex 'then'. Sentencing is not ended where it's suppose to end instead it's keep going so it gets a little bit of confusing. Story development is liked by me so far. Just so people know, I have only read 19 chapters so far because of premium so this review will be updated once I slowly catch up in the future. Everything else is pretty good.

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Wish of a Lazy Otaku

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LazyErosage
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Thanks for your honest review, I will try to improve

erebuss
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Yea I thought I could continue reading it but man after 15 chapters it gets annoying first few chapters had no error but man after chapter 5 it just went downhill s