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DaoistbipsLv32yr
2022-06-01 20:49

the best line I find in the 2nd chapter is" is your girlfriend pregnant??? " lol... like the start of the novel..two different personalities fall in love with each other such a good concept ..will like to see the growth of the characters...love it.. 🥤🥤

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