The MC feels like a complete side character. Till now every action that was taken was by Castle, who was the MC of the show not of this fanfic. The most noticeable thing that the MC has done was consoling a girl whose parents are going through a divorce. It feels like Castle is the main focus of this Fanfic. I will improve my ratings if the MC ever actually starts getting involved in the plot.
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