I've read 50 or so chapters and can say one thing for sure. The writing is really bad. Not grammatically, it's just bad. Author will stretch unimportant things like registration this, assessment that, to an absurd degree and insert tens of incomplete information in between. "You'll know in future. " is what you'll be reading most of the time. Every character has spoonfed the MC literally every small thing. Things like "Place your hand here. " ,"Take a breath" etc. Just word count stuff. Basically the novel has expands on things of no importance and gives incomplete information on things of importance . And I don't like it. You can actually skin through the chapters in 40 seconds and not lose any information. Really .
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