Eyy! It's ya' boy! Back at it again with the shameless reviews. Do check it out tho, seriously. I learned a lot from my experiences when writing my first book, I am trying to apply them all here. I appreciate your support! Thanks for checking this book out.
Hateful_Fellow
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LIKEthe start of the story is good, the pacing is quite decent, some typos here and there but its ok. now spoiler alert! in chapter around 60 when they got yeeted on the other side of the world, thats where the action fun stuff should start but its still the same info dump, some drama and i got bored so bye [img=recommend]
LulzLowKey:Does this novel involve any kind of realm building, city management or simple old kingdom building?
I really like this novel but there are a few flaws I would like to list. 1. Proper explanations are not given about the things introduced or the the explanation is spread across multiple chapters or are given at a much later after couple of chapters after introduction. 2. Occasional typing and spelling mistakes in the beginning chapters that I have noticed.