sorry but it's unreadable for me, i hope someone could fix and edit it, it has good concept but like most Fanfic by this author the english is so bad.

i had high hope for it but its a dissapoinment.Rape really.he thinks with his dick.rape is not for me bro.translation is readeble👎👎👎👎👎👎

Not sure If this isn't all just google translated from some Chinese writer (very hard to read sometimes) but the story itself in essence is very good. Whoever wrote all those stories is a genius at writing Soul Land fanfics. Very creative.

The protagonist is similar to Yun Che. .. . .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. ... .. .. ... .. .. ... .. .. .. ... ... .. ... .

Reveal spoiler

Wow! Another bad mtl translation of a chinese fanfiction with no links to nor permission from the original? This man must truly have no women on his phone.

I really wanted to get into this one in the MTL, but MC kept being called Waking Up instead of Su Xing. It was a chore to figure out his name, I'm giving 5 stars since I like DD/Soul Land. Good stuff

translation is so botched, cant even get the name right ........................................................a..a..a.a.a.a..a.a.a..a.a.a.a..a.a.a.a.

La idea es simplemente fenomenal rompe los conceptos de la edad de un anillo espiritual y lo hace de una forma fantástica implementado ideas de otros mundos