I don't usually read contemporary but I do believe this is a solid start. Albeit, there are a lot of errors in regards to capitalization and some grammar but this is easily fixable! I think the author has spent a lot of time with character building which is great, but I do believe that there may be too much dialogue at the start. I'd love to see the author take us through the main lead's life a little more and give a little more description of the world. All in all, 3.85/5! I think this book has potential!
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