This novel had huge potential. But the author failed to capitalise on the novel idea. Let me explain. Author fails to properly flush out the characters and hence they seem 2 dimensional. The world is poorly explained . The conversations seem bland. To top it all of, the MC thinks with his lower half. For a novel to be successful , plot should take the centre stage ( and not R18) . Otherwise , there is no difference between this novel and a p*rno.
Ryongul
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