Review Detail of AngryBolt in Creator System in Naruto World

The author writes competently and the idea is good, but he couldn’t cope with the execution; there is very little logic and frankly childish actions of the main character everywhere, and I generally keep silent about the system and its creator; in short, it’s horror and not fan fiction; the author needs to work on the story itself and then everything will be fine; good luck him in this 🤔