a story with a lot of potential, the narrative is sometimes a bit awkward but a story without fault doesn't exist so I can ignore that part and enjoy the story, especially for someone like me who is thirsty for some yuri plots
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LIKEnot a big issue but there're a lot of details like their motions and actions in the middle of a talk that might be a bit awkward at times but you don't necessarily need to fix that, you can just go with your own method of writing you're the most comfortable with
GKDRGKZ_213:thank you for reading my story hehehe~ I really appreciate it đCan you please tell me about the narrative? I want to learn more about it thank you~