Review Detail of Mel_Aniv in The Last Seeker Of Kimoptra

The story is nice and well established! Even the narrative was smooth as silk. My only advice was to improve the synopsis. It was world-building and not a hooking one for new readers.It was your chance to promote your novel and it has to contain key points in your novel. Such as the MC is introduced, your conflict was said, his adventures and goals. Not spoiling the plot but concise and direct. 😉