Bro don't take it to heart, i am just saying what I feel after reading the fic. Even though the idea was brilliant,the execution was boring. There is nothing new in it all!! In the Naruto quest all you did was save modoka( female madara) using talk no jutsu and nothing more. I suggest you to show more involvement of mc in quests rather repeating the same plotline. Thank you ๐
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that was the point... talk no jutsu is the highlight of that anime, the strongest jutsu kishimoto designed... well, I think many did not get that level of sarcasm ..
He means you did not change the story enough for it to be interesting, you can't just ad a new character into a story then have said new character have almost no effect on the plot except for a couple things that don't change much.(My opinion)
No you're wrong the strongest jutsu is not talk no jutsu Kishimoto designed it was.....THE SWING...
