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lostemm
lostemmLv152yr
2022-07-16 04:04

This is such a massive historical f up. Only read this if you can ignore any details. I believe should atleast have some knowledge of history and food if that is what your writing about.

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Immortal_Goddess
Immortal_GoddessLv15

The author said don’t impose history on this work as it was not based on any history. The space is also only an auxiliary thing and not the main plot😇

lostemm
lostemmLv15

While i can understand some, have a neighbor give her tomato in 3 bc. Why not just start a pizzeria? Have shared bicycles too? I get she does not want to use a historical time line, then the easiest fix is to build another world. Personally I don’t like this slap dash type of writing and makes it hard for me to not get annoyed, which I am sure there are others like me. Hence I said if you can ignore the details then you might be able to read. I only made it to chapter 12.

nadz_4life
nadz_4lifeLv14

somethings that the FL created in ancient times was mentioned in her history book, when she returned to her timeline after her death

lostemm:While i can understand some, have a neighbor give her tomato in 3 bc. Why not just start a pizzeria? Have shared bicycles too? I get she does not want to use a historical time line, then the easiest fix is to build another world. Personally I don’t like this slap dash type of writing and makes it hard for me to not get annoyed, which I am sure there are others like me. Hence I said if you can ignore the details then you might be able to read. I only made it to chapter 12.
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