Review Detail of Onjou in The Novel's Shadow
Review detail
Hello, the author here, since this is the first work I have ever made, I would greatly appreciate it if you could leave me some feedback regarding my work, please don't just trash on it and insult it and actually give me a reason for the bad review so I'm able to improve.
The Novel's Shadow
Onjou
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i honestly don't know why all these mc's don't just live their lives like the mc of The novel's extra, but instead the just focus on that worlds mc only. And why are you in a rush to make a mercenary guild, he is not even a d rank adventurer yet, and he can't even stand the sight of blood and murder. At least wait till until 50 chapters first before making it.
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Asadiq5010:i honestly don't know why all these mc's don't just live their lives like the mc of The novel's extra, but instead the just focus on that worlds mc only. And why are you in a rush to make a mercenary guild, he is not even a d rank adventurer yet, and he can't even stand the sight of blood and murder. At least wait till until 50 chapters first before making it.
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