Review Detail of Arch_Tysonoo in Twilight of Steel

Well here is my review- -There are alot of grammaticall mistakes. -The story development is fine but sometimes it makes progress to quickly. -Addition of 'Man from Star' is good to be honest and have alot of paths to develop. -Updating stability is something that's the problem here, need more! Well, I would recommend you to try this fanfic as it's pretty good and has alot of potential. Thanks for reading this out