We start off well, a "Solo leveling" story and it takes place in Japan, its powers are good and somewhat daring. However, it's funny how relatively new authors think that asking for money at the beginning... Correction, financial support for a story that is clearly a failure would be correct. First of all the pesonage is absurd, he is supposedly an old war veteran, with an incredible maturity and coolness to make decisions. Then the author forcibly decided to add forced interaction to claim such a silly love interest. Not to mention that he completely ruined the world development by making the dungeons appear 30 years earlier because he doesn't even know the world in which the story takes place. Cliches and references to typical Japanese novels.... Wrong verb tenses and points of view, scene jumps and internal thoughts used at the wrong times. After chapter 2, everything is absurd.
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LIKEWhy would that matter? He may just be a reader and not a writer. It's not like you have to be better at writing to make a review. You read the story and give your thought about it.
OutofideasLOL:Wow if you knew so much about writing, then why does yours not even have 100k views???
I don't consider myself a good writer, right now I'm writing my second novel and it's true that my first attempt was a failure. If you are interested you can read and review my novel about a crossover of Dune and Harry Potter. "Harry Potter and House Atreides."
OutofideasLOL:Wow if you knew so much about writing, then why does yours not even have 100k views???
GotaDeAgua:I don't consider myself a good writer, right now I'm writing my second novel and it's true that my first attempt was a failure. If you are interested you can read and review my novel about a crossover of Dune and Harry Potter. "Harry Potter and House Atreides."
The focus of the story is not romance, so it lacks a childish relationship and the mc's intentions may darken each time the plot progresses.
ABSenior:is it evil mc and no romance?
OutofideasLOL:Wow if you knew so much about writing, then why does yours not even have 100k views???