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Ramirys
RamirysLv132yr
2022-06-03 06:36

So far this looks like a very interesting and good novel. It is a fresh concept as you don't really see non human characters often on webnovel.

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BurningHeretic
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14 Chs

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MITCHIEWilliams
MITCHIEWilliamsLv4

This is a unique take on the dystopian world story. The world-building is wonderful, the author did a wonderful job in plotting the story. I was hooked from chapter 1, the descriptions did that. Looking forward to more chapters.

2yr

The_Baby_Girl
The_Baby_GirlLv1

Great world building. I'm looking forward to seeing where this story takes Ozul. There are a ton of different directions the story could go, so there's potential for this to have many chapters before it ends. I'm interested in learning about the other creatures Ozul will run into and how he'll deal with the challenges of his new world :)

2yr
Henrie99
Henrie99Lv11

I've been really enjoying this story and the character development. Ozul's decisions seem realistic for his circumstances. The fights scenes are to the point and describe really well.

2yr
Radish_Pie
Radish_PieLv1

I’ve really enjoyed the 10 chapters that are available so far and I cannot wait for the author to add more. I especially like the pace of the writing as it’s slow enough to explain what’s happening, but fast enough to keep you enthralled and wanting more! The world building is excellent! I’m excited to know what happens next with the psychological development of Ozul the main character. I see strife and hardship but all to get to a goal of a deeper meaning of his human and other dimensional life form. Excellent first novel from this author!

2yr
Jolan_Hildebrandt
Jolan_HildebrandtLv1

wow you spend a lot of time on set up, which I appreciate to a point. I think you could afford to be more efficient with your words. The long paragraphs repeat ideas and are unnecessary. Comb through the chapters and trim the fat from your work and it will be more enjoyable to read

2yr
Uzowei_Tehillah
Uzowei_TehillahLv3

love the way this story is going and the plot and character development is great I'm definitely adding this book to my library, keep up the good work author❤️

2yr
BurningHeretic
BurningHereticAuthor

Hi it's me, the author Writing this story is a blast and I have big plans for Ozul's future. I love reading everyone's comments and reviews, it keeps me motivated! This is my first Webnovel so if you have any constructive criticism please let me know! I am always improving my writing style so it'll change a bit as the story progresses. Thanks for all the support!

2yr
RomanceFanatic028
RomanceFanatic028Lv4

It was an enjoyable read. I like reading anything that's related to horror and let me tell you, the plot is very thrilling. So far i am liking Ozul's character that's why i would love to keep reading. [img=update][img=update]

2yr
Themerryberry
ThemerryberryLv1

I love this, there’s a new twist every chapter and I’m really excited to see where the MC goes with his development and skills and just his overall personality too.

2yr
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