the story definitely has its fun fantasy points but the main issue in my eyes it the translation and lack of editing. When I say this I mean the number in one paragraph will be 5 million, and then 2 sentences later it's 500 million. makes it a bit tiring to read. there also seems to be a bit of nationalism in the book but since it's fantasy and not on earth I didn't care. it's not worth mentioning compared to some books that seem like propaganda. lasty decent fantasy book leaving it at a 3/5 for now; there is a lot of plot holes yet to be filled so it could be a smartly written conclusion that ties it all together, or it could just wrap it up ignoring those holes, time will tell.
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