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GodOfLightning
GodOfLightningLv138mth
2024-04-10 11:54

Good story I guess just a lot wrong with it. Author focuses on things that would never happen and seems to not do any research before writing. The story is also heavily AU and the author focuses way to much time on bashing the government constantly. The author doesn’t seem to know if he wants a genius MC or a Stupid one. He claims he won’t do a thing yet somehow it still happens like saying no one would help me on this or no about it or something then suddenly everyone knows about it somehow. All in all the author just has a hard time actually portraying someone as a genius without a major nerf or plot holes and hate for any government.

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Arkage
ArkageLv15

OP MC novel. Read the synopsis fool!

Arkage
ArkageLv15

Also you only read to chapter 2.... You are level 13 so I thought you would know that the authors writing quality should go up after they gain experience by releasing more chapters and filling out their story. So why are you bashing a story that you have only read 2 chapters of?

Arkage
ArkageLv15

And another thing lol sorry. I have read the Halo books and this author is pretty faithful of the canon imo

GodOfLightning
GodOfLightningLv13

And I thought you would now that whole read thing is not accurate. A lot of things mess up with it including rereading a chapter or reading it offline by downloading it or using multiple devices like I do. And if your first chapters are bad what do you expect people to do? The whole point of reviews are to point out problems if that happens in the beginning it’s them that you point it out if it gets so bad you drop it in the first few then tell people so they can decide for themselves if they still want to read it. Thats what i do as well ill check the comments to see what people thought of it and depending on how many likes as well as similar comments ill judge if i want to read the book.

Arkage:Also you only read to chapter 2.... You are level 13 so I thought you would know that the authors writing quality should go up after they gain experience by releasing more chapters and filling out their story. So why are you bashing a story that you have only read 2 chapters of?
GodOfLightning
GodOfLightningLv13

So have I lol and he is not at all try again others in the book even point it out maybe make an argument with some proof next time? You can even look it up

Arkage:And another thing lol sorry. I have read the Halo books and this author is pretty faithful of the canon imo
GodOfLightning
GodOfLightningLv13

And it wasn’t about the canon it’s the things he added to canon that would never happen including the whole don’t salute me talk etc

Arkage:And another thing lol sorry. I have read the Halo books and this author is pretty faithful of the canon imo
GodOfLightning
GodOfLightningLv13

Fool read my comment I said he doesn’t portray him as OP the right way and nerfs him. Learn to read fool

Arkage:OP MC novel. Read the synopsis fool!
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GodOfLightning
GodOfLightningLv13

Also the fact it seems 25 people agree with me on this and you try to defend it who will I believe the twenty who also had the same problem with the novel or one guy with obvious wholes in his logic

Arkage:And another thing lol sorry. I have read the Halo books and this author is pretty faithful of the canon imo
Saeko_Kaburagi
Saeko_KaburagiLv14

I personally feel the Author should have researched how a Genius thinks, Military regulations and did more with the first two chapters than simply writing off in 3rd POV what happened. Though I'm only 2 chapters in, I'll have to see more before I can judge.

GodOfLightning
GodOfLightningLv13

Yep completely agree with that. Or at the very least looked up what genius people are like as well because they are also arrogant and you can look at any genius in history to be able to see that. He just did no research and completely messed up what someone like the mc would be.

Saeko_Kaburagi:I personally feel the Author should have researched how a Genius thinks, Military regulations and did more with the first two chapters than simply writing off in 3rd POV what happened. Though I'm only 2 chapters in, I'll have to see more before I can judge.
Arkage
ArkageLv15

ok lol.

GodOfLightning:And I thought you would now that whole read thing is not accurate. A lot of things mess up with it including rereading a chapter or reading it offline by downloading it or using multiple devices like I do. And if your first chapters are bad what do you expect people to do? The whole point of reviews are to point out problems if that happens in the beginning it’s them that you point it out if it gets so bad you drop it in the first few then tell people so they can decide for themselves if they still want to read it. Thats what i do as well ill check the comments to see what people thought of it and depending on how many likes as well as similar comments ill judge if i want to read the book.
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