First, the first chapter is just a log, it's not even a chapter. Second, the MC has everything given away and that's not bad, the problem is that he gets everything from the beginning and without any effort. Third, why is God/author going to improve the intelligence of MC, who is one of the most intelligent humans in history? He could give him some other ability that would be useful or improve his strength or speed a little, but instead of that improves the intelligence of one of the most intelligent humans, really? and for what?, so that he then behaves like a conceited idiot who knows everything and shows his abilities, that is, his inhuman intelligence to the ONI, yes of course, as if the ONI did not mutilate people, murder children or exterminate planets just because they think different from them.

Good story I guess just a lot wrong with it. Author focuses on things that would never happen and seems to not do any research before writing. The story is also heavily AU and the author focuses way to much time on bashing the government constantly. The author doesn’t seem to know if he wants a genius MC or a Stupid one. He claims he won’t do a thing yet somehow it still happens like saying no one would help me on this or no about it or something then suddenly everyone knows about it somehow. All in all the author just has a hard time actually portraying someone as a genius without a major nerf or plot holes and hate for any government.

Basically this is just a story containing explanations, lacking dialogue. I like the world design, but not your MC because he is too confident and arrogant. Besides that, you the author only made the MC the only smart one in the story, while the others are stupid and idiots. The story is just wish fulfillment (not in an adult context), the author immediately uses a method called plot armor to keep the MC on top.

A question do you have a discord and if not then I highly recommend you make one it's quite easy to do and would be helpful for communicating with your readers and such

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heh gotta admit it was tripped me up seeing a novel cover that used the image I used for my pfp for the last 5-6 years lol but i gave this a read since I like your other works and gotta say I liked it keep up the good work on not just this novel but all of them

A+ work on Author's part. Great storyline, interesting plot and hey, it's halo. Author makes little to no grammatical errors, the story has a a pretty straightforward development, all characters have depth, a couple chapters a week, and a well explored world background. What more can we ask for? Author is Chef Ramsay up in this

Really have enjoyed everything I read so far! Can't wait to see where you go with this! Keep it up, you're doing great!!

It's good book with a good story line but the writng is very repetitive.