Review Detail of Dragon_Warrior0 in Abyss of Dual Cultivation: Goddess's Lust system

This will be an indepth review from me so stop if you don't want spoilers for first 15 chapters or so. ...... The world - It's interesting with the abyss and layers and I hope to see the author explore it more as more times goes on in the story. Maybe even come up with unique climatic conditions etc. Grammer - Decent enough but with all I've read, it's a major inprovement. I didn't come to WN expecting perfect grammar and I didn't get it for most part. That being said, this is passable enough for me to not give up just from the grammer alone. It's rather fluid. Characters - They're interesting but many of them were introduced and were saved for later. who knows when that later might come or whether they'll be explored again or not. (I hope they do since the author takes notes to include them in their other story and the side-story is interesting ) That being said, there is a little issue with the pacing being all over the place for me but nothing major. I like this story and would recommend you to check out the first few chapters to see if it's your cup of tea.