Review Detail of ThePandaCritic in One piece: Reborn as villain

The initial idea was interesting but executed poorly. Like the genra of powers available to the character seems interesting but is a recipe for disaster. Like why even choose one piece to begin with. If the first mission happens on earth. The power the people have are so crazy, do they even need devil fruits and haki. And why have them see each other powers. This defects the fun of the hunt to me. There is no mystery since everyone knows each other and also their powers. Why is a 6-year-old so powerful these people are from the earth they are not ninjas training from a young age. At least start the story when a character has a chance to grow into their power cuz u hinted they need to train to use it. 6 months and he's ready to do adult stuff tf. It's funny reading this dude was bullied to the extent they wanted him dead for no reason. Also just because he's the villain why would your friend abandon him for a wish. Why they don't even kne what the wish can do. Is that how easily friends of kids are broken. This story has so many discrepancies it was a brain drain reading.