No idea what I was getting myself into with 6 chapters. Writing quality: the writing quality seemed fine within the first 3 chapters but swiftly went downhill for me. I thought it was going to be well put and written since it does seem like a first of its kind fan fiction, and only so in idea, the quality is like other fan fictions on this app... seems to be written by a 13 year old child with a bloodlust for action and adventure, as well as face slapping banter. Grammar on the other hand is better than most fan fictions. Story development: i can't say much since there was a sudden 6 month time-skip from the world transmigrated to and the protagonists original world all of a sudden. Once returned to the other world I had to drop it. Character design: Character design got a low 2 simply for the fact of sudden changing in attitude and emotions from, needing to train and get stronger, and then shift to blood thirsty and cold blooded killer. Also barely any introductions to any other character other than "izumi". Updating stability: 8 chapters in 9 days, pretty good. not sure if it's going to be stable and keep at this pace. world background: not much of explanations on where specifically anything is or the current events happening. No context clues to follow for this :( overall, could be better but not the worst.
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