This was a good read. Definitely better than the Author's other MHA Fanfic. He has a basic but versatile quirk. Writing Quality: 5/5 It seems like the Author has gotten experience in writing. It's particularly noticeable because there aren't that much 1st Person POVs anymore, unlike in his other MHA Fanfic. The writing is comprehensible with no grammatical mistakes, to my knowledge. Stability of Updates: 4.5/5 The Author took a long break before, but so far, his Update Stability has been good. Story Development: 5/5 The pacing is not fast. It isn't particularly slow, either. The story is currently approaching the U.S.J Arc, and I'm excited to see how the Author is going to go about that. Character Design: 4/5 The OCs' designs are great, but for the MC, I think the Author can find a better reference picture for him. World Background: 5/5 Nothing to say there. It's the My Hero Academia World.
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