ch 3- pretty good story for a fanfic for now I love tapov so this is nice altough it's a shame this dude doesn't edit or check his chapters after writing since there are a lot of mistakes like tranning in stead of training etc. also another tip with the 5 star technique needing the six eyes I think it's probably better to say that the technique needs perfect mana control and the six eyes can help with that or are you going for the family heirloom type since if that's the case it's alright I guess
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