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Original_Eternal
Original_EternalLv14mth
2024-12-04 14:52

i read till ch 80 sadly i don't have a phone only a laptop so i couldn't read the locked chs but what i read was amazing there are barely any Grammatical mistakes the pacing is great mc is likeable same is true for the FL (caution: tsundere) overall it's a great that is it's on the same level as my fav romcom novel: the angel next door spoils me rotten(anime ain't that good but the novel is supe cute) so i would recommend anyone to at least read the first 20 chs at the beginning mc's situation seems a bit too sad but later on it get's better and better now as for flaws: there are some obvious flaws like most anime has is that sometimes characters don't do simple things to remove whole lot of unnecessary misunderstanding mainly i am talking about a background check which is super easy to do but a certain older girl didn't do it well it's nothing major and it only makes the story more fun so it's okay and thankyou for the novel Author

A Book Can't Be Judged By The Cover

DaisukiDayoSenpai
4.9
160 Chs

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Original_Eternal
Original_EternalLv1

oh and i only gave it a four star because i have only read 80 chs so the next star depends on the remaining 80 chs

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DaisukiDayoSenpai
DaisukiDayoSenpaiAuthor

thank you so much for reading this novel. I'm glad you're enjoying it so far, your review is really appreciated, also, things will go looking up from chapter 80 onwards, and then a very unexpected plot twist at the end hehhe, if you don't want to spend money unlocking chapters, you can get like 2 daily passes everyday, I think? So you can continue reading the novel. once again, thank you so much for reading! I really appreciate you taking the time to read and enjoy one of my masterpieces

Original_Eternal:oh and i only gave it a four star because i have only read 80 chs so the next star depends on the remaining 80 chs
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Original_Eternal
Original_EternalLv1

i will soon after i get my smartphone back

DaisukiDayoSenpai:thank you so much for reading this novel. I'm glad you're enjoying it so far, your review is really appreciated, also, things will go looking up from chapter 80 onwards, and then a very unexpected plot twist at the end hehhe, if you don't want to spend money unlocking chapters, you can get like 2 daily passes everyday, I think? So you can continue reading the novel. once again, thank you so much for reading! I really appreciate you taking the time to read and enjoy one of my masterpieces
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I love this book so much. I can’t wait for more really good chapters.

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What is admirable is the planned structure for the delivery of the novel in only three volumes, it gives us: 20 chapters per volume. And the synopsis to unite two opposite characters: the worst with the best. The intervention of the teacher stands out, who assumes this challenge for the benefit of the class. Readers enjoy the pleasant way of writing. successes!

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DaisukiDayoSenpai
DaisukiDayoSenpaiAuthor

Hello everyone! Another announcement from Senpai himself, hehhehe. Once again, I just want to thank everyone for completing this novel, and thank you for a million views >///< Also, I just wanna say, that the officially last chapter of this novel is coming out soon! I apologize for not publishing it sooner. After all, the side story function just got activated yesterday for my novel. So please look forward to it! It's bound to happen within the week! Have a great read >///<

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DaisukiDayoSenpai
DaisukiDayoSenpaiAuthor

Dear readers, DaisukiDayoSenpai here! So I've finished this novel for quite some time now, and I just noticed that I actually got a contract for this novel. I don't know how, but I remembered applying for a contract back when this novel was halfway done. And now that It was already complete, that's when I got the contract hahhaha, There were a couple of things that I'd change in this novel but I really liked the ending. I might publish a side story soon, but I don't know how I'd fit everything in one chapter. Once again, I would like to thank all of you for supporting me until the end. This is my very first romcom and I'm glad that it's got so many positive reviews and comments. I'll strive to become a better writer so I could write more novels like this one. And this may probably be my last announcement via the review section, so I'd just like to mention that I might lock a couple of chapters, just so I could finally go premium. It won't be too much though, since I quite enjoy this novel as free. That's it for my announcement, this is DaisukiDayoSenpai signing off >///<

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Holy_mackrel
Holy_mackrelLv13

Very rare to see realistic fiction being posted in this place and those that actually cover good topics. But this one is captivating in a way and I like the overall execution of the first few chapters

2yr
DaisukiDayoSenpai
DaisukiDayoSenpaiAuthor

What shamelessness, reviewing his own work! Hehehe This is the first time I'm writing a romcom, slice of life novel. I've already completed the plot and the entire story. I hope you like it! I'm participating in the WSA 2022 with this novel too and am excited to see how it turns out. All your support is very much appreciated and I hope you enjoy reading this ^-^

2yr
TheLastOne95
TheLastOne95Lv2

This feels more like a store brought book than a web novel. The quality feels that good. I have only started it and will be going through it slowly, since it is SoL. Keep up the good work.

2yr
the_running_joker
the_running_jokerLv12

A new idea, and a fresh start, this novel was one that I read in my breaks and find myself feeling refreshed, I am stacking up these chapters...

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Moonwriting
MoonwritingLv4

Hi, dear author, the book is quite captive, the chapters are interesting and your writing skill keeps the reader engaged with the story. keep it up dear, looking for more.....

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