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Alexander_the_grey
Alexander_the_greyLv52yr
2022-06-18 09:55

Although I like the premise, worlds and general writing style, I find myself not enjoying the way things have been developing since the MC went to Hogwarts. His logic for befriending anyone is near emotionless and almost exploitative as he essentially wants to manipulate children into becoming lifelong crime/evil defeaters. The way his relationship with Dumbledore has gone is just too much. And on a more personal opinion, Mary Jane is almost always a the least fitting romantic interest and that’s when it’s with Peter Parker, with Batman that’d be even worst and double that with the weird MCU/Zendaya version. So yeah, although rather well written, I really don’t like how the characters are being developed and the confirmed romantic partner.

I'm Batman (HP Xover)

AlienWarlord
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jose_vladimir
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Hermanooooo!!!!!!!!!! cuando subes la de un nuevo Satanas

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SageOfSins
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Mate, it seems to early to give any critically analyzed review. And I wish the best and haste to the coming chapters. Although, if I am a bit honest, I am having second thoughts on adding your fic in my library, cause I was one of the first readers for your old Voldemort in MCU fic. And I have gone from having praise and recommending it to others, to actively boycotting and disclaimer it as a heresy on account of all JKR fans. So, please don't ruin this fic, that's all I ask. Happy writing.

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Leylindd
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AlienWarlord
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I gotta do it...

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Count_Daath
Count_DaathLv14

I don't feel like giving a long one so here goes. The only way I had seen this story working was the HPverse being weak, but you already decided to make Harry Potter important when in truth their magic is D-tier at best.

2yr
SGTHAWK
SGTHAWKLv4

The author is one of the best on the site enjoy this hfhdhdhdbdbdndbdbdnbdnfnfnfnnfjfkfkrndijrjfjrjrjfujfjfndundjnrjndjfjdnjdnfjnfjfufnfjfjfjfnfn

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Hunter_101
Hunter_101Lv13

stars are honest but I stopped reading it because after meeting hermoine for the first time he becomes like a really best friend and he wants to become harrys friend saying he's be a powerfull wizard. the sucking up to other behavior kills Bruce Wayns Carecter.Because McGonagall say mc is wealthier than most oldest and noble houses so why is he sucking up to others I don't get it.

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itachirocks
itachirocksLv3

forced situation , dialogues and unrealistic character personalities. The story went downhill from hp arc onwards. if you like a saint mc then go for it.

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BarbaryLion23
BarbaryLion23Lv5

Reveal spoiler

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ProdigyOrion
ProdigyOrionLv4

I've wnjoyed your storues for quite a while, keep at it, never give up. don't listen to the hate comments and keep on keeping on. your stories are definitely worth a read and I cant wait to see where this one goes.

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GUARW
GUARWLv4

is this a ff that batman doesn't even hesitate to kill his enemies???🤨🤨🤨🤨🤨🤨🤨🤨🤨🤨🤨🤨🤨🤨🤨🤨🤨🤨🤨🤨🤨🤨🤨🤨🤨🤨🤨🤨🤨🤨🤨🤨🤨🤨🤨🤨

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