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A classic review section of harem=5 stars so here i am. Went into this thinking it would be a unique Avatar fanfic... It turned out to be a Chinese clusterf**k of cultivation+ mentally challenged MC and a story thats constantly prattles away about chi rotation and droplets x 9= something (his power i guess). Don't get your hopes up, its mind numbing if you want a story thats enjoyable.
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I plan to redo them later, I don't have time for that, when the energy system I'm still going to keep it and see if I can develop it into someone good.
Pythia:I suggest, and i'm not saying this maliciously or to insult you, deleting the first three paragraphs. Those first three chapter instantly gave me a very poor view of your MC and the setting as a whole. The power system, chi pool whatever and wish stuff really downgrades the quality based upon the newer chapters.
Ok it's obvious you didn't read the whole thing and just dropped it when you got to the info dump chapter, first of all no it's not a cultivation novel, first of all there is no energy system in avatar you can look it up on Wiki, second of all yes Chi is based on Chinese cultivation, the other name Chi and Qi, so if you didn't want to read something based on cultivation then you shouldn't even read an avatar fanfic, that is if they didn't base the energy system on something else, moreover the energy system is only explained once and then only mentioned a few times, that is, you really haven't read it.
Bending comes from spirits and their power is the connection to their element and how they utilise it. Airbending with freedom, water fluidity, earth with strength/willpower and fire with emotion and with further understanding energy,.
God_Unknown000:Ok it's obvious you didn't read the whole thing and just dropped it when you got to the info dump chapter, first of all no it's not a cultivation novel, first of all there is no energy system in avatar you can look it up on Wiki, second of all yes Chi is based on Chinese cultivation, the other name Chi and Qi, so if you didn't want to read something based on cultivation then you shouldn't even read an avatar fanfic, that is if they didn't base the energy system on something else, moreover the energy system is only explained once and then only mentioned a few times, that is, you really haven't read it.
"Bending is the ability to manipulate an element and is significant to many aspects of life in the world. There are five known bending arts; four of them bend a specific physical element while the fifth bends the energy within the human body itself." This is from the official wiki... sooo whats this about no energy in avatar then?
God_Unknown000:Ok it's obvious you didn't read the whole thing and just dropped it when you got to the info dump chapter, first of all no it's not a cultivation novel, first of all there is no energy system in avatar you can look it up on Wiki, second of all yes Chi is based on Chinese cultivation, the other name Chi and Qi, so if you didn't want to read something based on cultivation then you shouldn't even read an avatar fanfic, that is if they didn't base the energy system on something else, moreover the energy system is only explained once and then only mentioned a few times, that is, you really haven't read it.
For God's sake, are you really dumb or what? Bending is a power of the avatar world and not the power system, tell me how it differentiates the amount of Chi from one person to another? How do you know if someone is a master and who is yet to become a master, how do you advance through these stages? It has no obvious measure of power, it simply has the result that bends it, I can't just write that he achieved bending, how did he achieve it, how does he advance?
Pythia:"Bending is the ability to manipulate an element and is significant to many aspects of life in the world. There are five known bending arts; four of them bend a specific physical element while the fifth bends the energy within the human body itself." This is from the official wiki... sooo whats this about no energy in avatar then?
And it's not a cultivation novel.... hmmm. It's pretty obvious too if you've... well, watched Avatar. They fight based upon skill and technique, hence the chi pool rotation drip drip 9000 makes no sense other than to fuel a cultivation world foundation to base your cliches and world structure upon.
God_Unknown000:For God's sake, are you really dumb or what? Bending is a power of the avatar world and not the power system, tell me how it differentiates the amount of Chi from one person to another? How do you know if someone is a master and who is yet to become a master, how do you advance through these stages? It has no obvious measure of power, it simply has the result that bends it, I can't just write that he achieved bending, how did he achieve it, how does he advance?
Chi or qi[1] refers to the metaphysical energy that flows throughout the human body. It is a concept that serves as the root of bending and an array of other skills. Humans who lose their physical bodies after meditating into the Spirit World can potentially regain their physical bodies or "become whole again" by extracting another person's chi from their "dan tien". Extracting the Avatar's chi can supposedly lead to immortality. Hundun is the only known practitioner, claiming to have discovered the technique from "the mystics" after countless ages of searching in the Spirit World.[21] from the Wiki, you can go there if you want, search for Chi avatar and read before you speak.
Pythia:And it's not a cultivation novel.... hmmm. It's pretty obvious too if you've... well, watched Avatar. They fight based upon skill and technique, hence the chi pool rotation drip drip 9000 makes no sense other than to fuel a cultivation world foundation to base your cliches and world structure upon.
I literally agreed that chi was in Avatar.... wheres the cultivation BS come from then. Avatar's chi and chakra are very different from the Chinese young master version. Remember when Aang refused the avatar state because he kept his love for Katara.
God_Unknown000:Chi or qi[1] refers to the metaphysical energy that flows throughout the human body. It is a concept that serves as the root of bending and an array of other skills. Humans who lose their physical bodies after meditating into the Spirit World can potentially regain their physical bodies or "become whole again" by extracting another person's chi from their "dan tien". Extracting the Avatar's chi can supposedly lead to immortality. Hundun is the only known practitioner, claiming to have discovered the technique from "the mystics" after countless ages of searching in the Spirit World.[21] from the Wiki, you can go there if you want, search for Chi avatar and read before you speak.
Chakras is just one of the interpretations of energy in avatar, for example grandpa iron while teaching zuko about redirecting lightning spoke about the hence tian, that yes it is a Chinese concept, according to Qi, and lastly tell me why I have to follow the original work, yes I already explained that I created this energy system for the simple fact that I couldn't advance the story without an extremely big time skip, first the MC came from another universe with bending rules like the avatar ones, but how would he practice them? Besides that I created this energy system to make it easier to understand how things will progress, it is not even explained properly in avatar why there are people who do not have bending and others who do, so I simply turned this into the reason for the lack of Chi, but as Chi lacks what is the measure of unit from where the drops came out, how to increase the Chi would be aging, but I would have to make the MC age to make him stronger? So I simply used a compression method, it looks like cultivation but it is not, it simply has a unit measure of power the concept of bending is still there
Pythia:I literally agreed that chi was in Avatar.... wheres the cultivation BS come from then. Avatar's chi and chakra are very different from the Chinese young master version. Remember when Aang refused the avatar state because he kept his love for Katara.
You think that made it simple? Oh lord help me if you get to any complicated parts. You think your readers are gonna sit there with a calculator to work out his chi ocean/sea/pool/puddle every time he does a spiritual backflip?
God_Unknown000:Chakras is just one of the interpretations of energy in avatar, for example grandpa iron while teaching zuko about redirecting lightning spoke about the hence tian, that yes it is a Chinese concept, according to Qi, and lastly tell me why I have to follow the original work, yes I already explained that I created this energy system for the simple fact that I couldn't advance the story without an extremely big time skip, first the MC came from another universe with bending rules like the avatar ones, but how would he practice them? Besides that I created this energy system to make it easier to understand how things will progress, it is not even explained properly in avatar why there are people who do not have bending and others who do, so I simply turned this into the reason for the lack of Chi, but as Chi lacks what is the measure of unit from where the drops came out, how to increase the Chi would be aging, but I would have to make the MC age to make him stronger? So I simply used a compression method, it looks like cultivation but it is not, it simply has a unit measure of power the concept of bending is still there
of course not, even then it's just a basic count of times, I just wrote it that way for logic, I can't just say he gained that level of power, because yes, but I admit it got more complicated, which is why I stopped explaining about it afterwards, simply mentioning what was going on.
Pythia:You think that made it simple? Oh lord help me if you get to any complicated parts. You think your readers are gonna sit there with a calculator to work out his chi ocean/sea/pool/puddle every time he does a spiritual backflip?
God_Unknown000:of course not, even then it's just a basic count of times, I just wrote it that way for logic, I can't just say he gained that level of power, because yes, but I admit it got more complicated, which is why I stopped explaining about it afterwards, simply mentioning what was going on.
In the first 3 chapters I didn't really have a plan or basis, I just wrote it to train, but as I started to have people reading I just decided to create the plan, after a lot of thinking and not wanting to have to rewrite everything I started to think about the what to do, so then I created the energy system as a test, and as I saw that it didn't go well I decided not to focus on it, but there is a plan, and yes there is a mystery even though no.comeco didn't have a plan myself I was still thinking about the mystery behind it.
Pythia:Theres no roadmap or plan for this story is there? This may be where my problem lies.
I suggest, and i'm not saying this maliciously or to insult you, deleting the first three paragraphs. Those first three chapter instantly gave me a very poor view of your MC and the setting as a whole. The power system, chi pool whatever and wish stuff really downgrades the quality based upon the newer chapters.
God_Unknown000:In the first 3 chapters I didn't really have a plan or basis, I just wrote it to train, but as I started to have people reading I just decided to create the plan, after a lot of thinking and not wanting to have to rewrite everything I started to think about the what to do, so then I created the energy system as a test, and as I saw that it didn't go well I decided not to focus on it, but there is a plan, and yes there is a mystery even though no.comeco didn't have a plan myself I was still thinking about the mystery behind it.
Pythia:I suggest, and i'm not saying this maliciously or to insult you, deleting the first three paragraphs. Those first three chapter instantly gave me a very poor view of your MC and the setting as a whole. The power system, chi pool whatever and wish stuff really downgrades the quality based upon the newer chapters.
Furthermore, the energy system I created is not about cultivation, it simply serves to explain a being's energy reserves, it has nothing about cultivation basis or anything like that.
Pythia:I suggest, and i'm not saying this maliciously or to insult you, deleting the first three paragraphs. Those first three chapter instantly gave me a very poor view of your MC and the setting as a whole. The power system, chi pool whatever and wish stuff really downgrades the quality based upon the newer chapters.