Review Detail of PineappleThrower in The CEO's Babymomma
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The story had so much potential but fell from the lack of progress and stringing along of the readers. The writing eventually felt like they did anything to get enough words on the page to make you spend more money. I knew it was going to be slow burn story (at least they warned you before) but this became sloooooow half way through. The worst part was their comments, where they kept promising an end that never happens. 198 chapters out and still no conclusion after more than a month of waiting. Could have been a great story, but really fell for me after 100 episodes and feel cheated having to spend money on this lazy writing.
The CEO's Babymomma
Da_Rose
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Read your review, and firstly I'd start by saying sorry for any inconveniences or misunderstanding. The book has 218 chapters not 198 chapters, and the 218th chapter happens to be the end of the book. And secondly, not 'anything' was written to meet a word count. You might be displeased that you're yet to access the last twenty chaps of the book, but that isn't reason enough to talk down on the quality of the book. Time and effort were put into writing each chapter, and yes while everyone is entitled to their opinions and readers do spend money in reading, you still can't talk down someone's work in that manner. I believe you wouldn't have read to the 198th chapter if the book was actually subpar. I do not intend to offend, so I apologize again for any inconveniences and misunderstanding. Do have a nice day.
Hello, and thank you for your reply. Firstly, your reply made me reread my review, and I would like to start by saying I apologize for my clumsy wording that, I agree, made it come off as a bit mean. Therefore, yes, I should clarify I did initially ENJOY THE NOVEL, and I should have made that clearer in my review. I wouldn't have spent my golden tickets and, as you said, continued reading 198 chapters if I didn't. However, the latter half was what I had the most issues with, and therefore lowered my grade. And yes, I realize that there are 218 chapters, but as I do not have access to them yet, I still haven't read the conclusion, which, as was written in the comment in chapter 191, would end in 4 chapters (hence, the feeling of being cheated, maybe think about removing it if possible). I do regret my wording in calling the writing lazy, so for that, I do apologize. It came from frustration with a lack of progress in the second half. But I do agree that it was uncalled for, and I understand you put a lot of heart and effort into the story, which was the reason I even started reading it in the first place. I also want to note that my grading should have been a 3; I accidentally lowered the character stars before submitting. Even though it is a lower score, it does not mean I see you as a writer as subpar. Again, thank you for clarifying and calling me out on my review. I hope you haven't been too offended or that I haven't ruined your day!
Da_Rose:Read your review, and firstly I'd start by saying sorry for any inconveniences or misunderstanding. The book has 218 chapters not 198 chapters, and the 218th chapter happens to be the end of the book. And secondly, not 'anything' was written to meet a word count. You might be displeased that you're yet to access the last twenty chaps of the book, but that isn't reason enough to talk down on the quality of the book. Time and effort were put into writing each chapter, and yes while everyone is entitled to their opinions and readers do spend money in reading, you still can't talk down someone's work in that manner. I believe you wouldn't have read to the 198th chapter if the book was actually subpar. I do not intend to offend, so I apologize again for any inconveniences and misunderstanding. Do have a nice day.
I'm honestly not offended, and I hope you're not too. Regarding the book, I'd be honest and say the reason I haven't tagged it completed so readers who don't purchase privilege can read it is because, I intended on writing a side story of a few chapters for some characters like Sophia and Ty. I love having a plan before writing so I don't get stuck. But unfortunately I haven't been motivated lately. But reading your review and other comments in the past week, I think I'll just settle for an epilogue and tag it completed. That way the 20 privilege chapters will be released for everyone to access it. I hope I can do it soon, preferably in the next 48 hours, because writing hasn't really being easy these past weeks. Anyways, I'll try and do so, so we can all move on and have our ending. Thanks for your understanding and for going on this journey with us. And also thanks for every support you gave us😘😘❣️.
Klobbern:Hello, and thank you for your reply. Firstly, your reply made me reread my review, and I would like to start by saying I apologize for my clumsy wording that, I agree, made it come off as a bit mean. Therefore, yes, I should clarify I did initially ENJOY THE NOVEL, and I should have made that clearer in my review. I wouldn't have spent my golden tickets and, as you said, continued reading 198 chapters if I didn't. However, the latter half was what I had the most issues with, and therefore lowered my grade. And yes, I realize that there are 218 chapters, but as I do not have access to them yet, I still haven't read the conclusion, which, as was written in the comment in chapter 191, would end in 4 chapters (hence, the feeling of being cheated, maybe think about removing it if possible). I do regret my wording in calling the writing lazy, so for that, I do apologize. It came from frustration with a lack of progress in the second half. But I do agree that it was uncalled for, and I understand you put a lot of heart and effort into the story, which was the reason I even started reading it in the first place. I also want to note that my grading should have been a 3; I accidentally lowered the character stars before submitting. Even though it is a lower score, it does not mean I see you as a writer as subpar. Again, thank you for clarifying and calling me out on my review. I hope you haven't been too offended or that I haven't ruined your day!