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JustHereForBLlolz
JustHereForBLlolzLv1411mth
2024-06-02 22:25

I read 108 chapters and never felt the plot develop. The primary couple is having their first private conversation and with so many supporting characters it feels like this is not meant to be a bl, rather it reads like a chaebol drama. That's fine but it's not what was expected. I believe that an index of characters would help because there are so many and they all have nicknames or are called by their relationship to other people. It's all very confusing. Overall, I hope the author is enjoying their work and that they grow into character creation and plot building. Unfortunately, I can't see myself following up on this particular novel. Best of luck.

Charming Idol’s Shameless Choreographer (BL)

vjey
4.4
122 Chs

Liked it!

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vjey
vjeyAuthor

It's a slow-burn story. So obviously, it moves slowly, especially when it moves back and forth with the main leads' present story and their back story. I know it's not everyone's cup of tea, too. Thank you for suggesting the index for characters. I will add it. I hope you find stories that are of your liking. :)

11mth
C_H_R_chr
C_H_R_chrLv4

this is what making this novel unique and keeping me on toes

22d
JustHereForBLlolz
JustHereForBLlolzLv14

I'm glad you're enjoying it. I'm reading a story now where the mc and ml don't meet until chapter 31, don't kiss until chapter 147 (off-screen, we only hear about it later), and don't kiss again for another 100 chapters. I like a slow burn, it's just a matter of pacing for me.

C_H_R_chr:this is what making this novel unique and keeping me on toes
22d
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O_C_E_H_U_E_M
O_C_E_H_U_E_MLv3

even the updating stability increased now ..the novel is one of my favourite on webnovel

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C_H_R_chr
C_H_R_chrLv4

I don't know why but I feel reading this whenever I feel down .It has some sort of healing power....It's super good

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Waciaya_Okumu
Waciaya_OkumuLv14

Now can we please go on, I love everything about this book ,author please please continue, and could you please ensure the choreographer and band leader end up together ❤?!

1yr
Funmilola_85
Funmilola_85Lv4

Reveal spoiler

2yr
C_H_R_chr
C_H_R_chrLv4

more updates please .its awesome with giving importance to not only ml,mc but also others around them.

2yr
Marylou1229
Marylou1229Lv15

I truly enjoy this authors work. The way her story is developing his wonderful. It truly shows the bias of their society but at the same time many of the characters have some sort of moral support found from people they choose to accept and are able to find happiness. The characters back stories are intriguing and keep you captivated. Please give this story your support you won't be disappointed.

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TisMe
TisMeLv3

Dropped after a few chapters bc there were too many characters being introduced at once. it was difficult deciphering who was who and what role they had.

11mth
DaoistFIAtDX
DaoistFIAtDXLv4

I really like this writing style and the story progress tooIt's worth it

1yr
Apocalypse
ApocalypseLv15

I figured this'll be a quick read so I listen to the audio at work. I shouldn't have done that. So far it very emotion evoking story. The second son (forgot his name already) being shunned, the choreographer family situation, the guy (forgot his name too) who is in love with the second son (His love and thoughts make me want to squil). Good story. Write more chapters please. I don't think I'm use to the name are these korean names. They're kinda hard for me to remember. It nice for a chance. Choi Hanuel (idk if I wrote that correctly. too lazy to check and going off a vague memory of the name) anyway self pleasuring scene 5 stars☆☆☆☆☆.

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R0manceLover
R0manceLoverLv15

Love to see more of these characters! Fabulous work dear author for writing such a well rounded story!

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