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2022-05-20 12:36

First review by yours truly. This is my 2nd fantasy novel (male-leading) and my entry for WSA 2022. About MC (Siegren) * Personality: Silent. A man of few words (in the initial chapters) * Weapon: Uses a greatsword/claymore called “Soulless” that could absorb and nullify any type of power * Abilities: — Unknown * Remarks: His thoughts and background will be revealed later on as the story progresses About FMC (Lumi) * Personality: Sassy. Usually talks but not to the point of annoyance. * Abilities: Divine Power * Remarks: Despite her ‘divinity,’ she’s not a saint. She could kill people without batting an eye, and pass it off as “penance” and punishment from the Goddess. I outlined this over a year ago and made a bunch of illustrations featuring the characters and scenes from the book. The links are on my bio, and HD versions of the novel art are available on my Twitter ^^ If you have any more qns, just drop them on the comment below. I’ll be responsive as much as I can! Fantasy music theme of VilRe: https://youtu.be/ewLsklXif_I

Villainous Retribution

Chainslock
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aigotcha
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Is there a way to commission you?

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Chainslock
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I’m currently closed for commissions rn, sorry :<<

aigotcha:Is there a way to commission you?
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ah, ok but thanks for replying

Chainslock:I’m currently closed for commissions rn, sorry :<<
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I've read another of this author's novels, and honestly reading this one was also quite fun. I have already gotten hooked, and can't wait for more of it to come.

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I really like this novel so far. It is different and something fresh to read. The author does a very good job with their writing style and making the novel entertaining.

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The way you word things is awkward. It's like your trying to impress the reader instead of focusing on clarity. That being said, I could follow the story for the most part. Read your work aloud and smooth over the bumpy parts before you put out chapters that the best advice I can give

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