Review Detail of DaoistuEtpEO in The Grey Potter

This was a great chapter. Perhaps you should add the background of Andrew Charlus Potter, like where he attended school, personality, and what magic he is good at. Including his associates. I hope you include details from beyond Britain's magical society, such as the species their, and what other magical societies in different countries are there. You should add pictures for what the characters in the story look like.