idk fam like first ch and I kinda got lost.i have to search up names just to understand the story.if want to write a original novel write.but if it's it's fanfic than it suppose to be a fanfic.i don't like I foogle some names it don't come up like.that is what I said Idk.the whole thing I whole is just good.is not great not the best.is just good.could have been better.and keep on with just saying and do some reachearch of the thing u wanna fanfic don't keep putting things in it when there aren't in in it.and your writing needs a little bit of work.but keep on going.and second I ain't good at writing a story and I know how hard it is.so get it.and I'm not like being a Karen I'm just saying how I felt reading it.
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