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Bluepinkshrimp
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2024-07-09 15:49

Thank you for writing this book, I think there is some punctuation mistake but still tolerable and enjoyable✨✨✨✨✨

Heavenly Kingdom: The Kingdom among the clouds

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Bright_Gabriel_9341
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This troupe is quite familiar. And the name of the novel explained almost everything there is to know about this novel. The author's gradual unveiling of the plot is quite interesting. Nice one.

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Alicia_Melciot
Alicia_MelciotLv15

to be honest, this novel is kind of mix from other novel. the MC is quite strong, but she couldn't manifest her ability due to her mentality and other reason. if the world max lv is 99. the she must the apex predator there. with her body or race much stronger then the original inhabitants of the world, she should be able to fight. (look the Overlord, Ainz is max leveled and he is unstoppable in that world)

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_Scarlett_Dawn
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It's an amazing story, I really like it, but what I have to complain about is TWO FAST PASSES PER CHAPTER??! That's just ridiculous, no matter the story.

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Nancy_Micheal_4985
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honestly speaking you book is readable and enjoyable and everything is perfect I did not read all the chapter I only read few .chapter and i was amazed good job author keep it up

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Moe_Cyan_Pile
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Shameless Author review 5 star. Thanks for reading, hope you enjoyed. Also thanks to the people that supported this. It is greatly appreciated.

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RadeNXJafaR
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very good read. I found this story from Wattpad.

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Butterblock
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Generic story with boring mc. Every sentence is one paragraph with no period at the end. Stinks of AI or mtl.

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IrgendeinTyp
IrgendeinTypLv15

The writing quality is really bad and the author really needs a proofreader or at least use some software like grammarly if they want to take money for this. Especially since chapter cost 11 coins which is more than most properly proofread books on this site. The story in itself is quite good though and keeps one engaged with the novel despite the bad writing quality and occasional copy pasted word definition from Merriam Webster or Wikipedia that the author tries to pass of as the characters having deep insight into some topics or something. This book is clearly just a hobby and if it was free It would deserve a 5/10. but since it isn't (and on top of that it's quite expensive) I would give it a 3/10.

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