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TonyT
TonyTLv22yr
2022-05-28 10:17

Your book is really good. the plot is very strong. The arrangements of characters are well. keep it up waiting for the next chapters. I hope you must complete your book.

You Are Mine, I'm Yours Season 2

safa_bukhari
4.7
111 Chs

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kerryn
kerrynLv4

The story is inspiring with real life lessons.😀 I am looking forward to learn more from the upcoming chapters. Keep it up Safa. [img=update][img=update]

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L_Fit
L_FitLv14

This book is nothing like the synopsis and is a mish-mash of stories but around chapter 23 it becomes word for word (word for word except for some name changes; Emmy in lieu of Nora) Anna Zaires’ book Twist Me #1. The author has stolen the story. Plagiarism is illegal. This is wrong!!!

2yr
McCrunch
McCrunchLv10

Great work, very descriptive with both the environment and character emotions, Very visual and helps with immersion. Writing quality was quite good I had no trouble keeping up with the story. I've read up to chapter 10 and I would say overall good job.

2yr
Sunus_Writes
Sunus_WritesLv2

I am giving you an overall review not just because of anything, other than the fact that you deserve it. Your description and introductory paragraph is soul searching and goes deep into the mind, your dialogue is something that flows easily and is very understandable. Your narration is every minute endearing. Trust me, your book is beautiful. As I say to every other writer, there is more room for development. Good luck writer

2yr
Kittylovely
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Amazing read, author clearly emphasizes the character's feeling which is what I appreciate! Definitely added to my library! [img=recommend][img=recommend]

2yr
safa_bukhari
safa_bukhariAuthor

Creations is hard, cheer me up read it and it in your library. Give honest review and vote my book. I love your review and vote. thank you so much 💓

2yr
TheSuccessor
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Compelling story and plot, one of the most important things in writing your story. That's what your book has, including the good writing quality.

2yr
Emmy_Thomson
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Really good romance [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update]

2yr
Maryixxx
MaryixxxLv4

I could tell that this book has potential with minor revisions, especially with the narrations. Sometimes, too much description breaks the momentum of the scene. However, overall it's a nice story with a great twist.

1yr
_raidha_
_raidha_Lv4

I love your work! Amazing details and easy to read. Loved how you portray real life lessons. Definitely adding to my library! It has a strong plot and no sloppy details.

2yr
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