Review Detail of Demigod_of_All in Harem in the Sole World: Maiden Infringement Play (Old)

Hello, dear readers. This is the first sci-fi work that I have taken seriously. I hope you guys will like it. This is a story based on a boy that prevents himself from interacting with others. His power was lethal. That was the reason for him getting shut-in, but after some years of being shut in, he wanted to experience the outer world. Not because he was bored of being shut in, but for an important reason, a wish that he wanted to fulfill.  Well, I'm sure you'll like it. The beginning might be a little boring, maybe.  And as for grammar, well, honestly, English is not my first language. I'll try to improve it as much as I can, but if it still has flaws, then please bear with it.  Character development? Well, as the story goes on, the characters and their nature will develop as well, and you'll soon understand everything that'll happen in the story. Also, I'm not an experienced author; I'm still on the way to learning from my mistakes. Feel free to tell me about my backlogs.  Don't forget to comment at the chapter's end or in the paragraphs.  Also, if you like the story, then support me with your PS. If the book succeeds in ranking, then I'll start publishing 2 chapters per day. Well, last but not the least, stay well.