Review Detail of Mr_Morning_Star in Harem in the Sole World: Maiden Infringement Play (Old)

This was a good start to the novel but since I don't have much to go off of I will shortly summarize what I think Writing Quality: The writing quality is good but sometimes gets oveshadowed by the long dialogues, and the paragraphing can use some work other than that the punctuation is good. Stability of Updates: Still to early to tell for this but will keep myself updated with the latest chapters. Story Development: Story development feels smooth but as I said the long dialogues can be a bit rough on the story and the pacing can be easily thrown off. Character Design: Solid fleshed out characters, detailed and all. World Background: Some more detail on the worlds background would be cool but I'll leave that to time itself as there are only 8 chapters with tons of space to work on. This is definitely going to stay on the library and is a must read. Cheers!