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2023-07-31 11:23

I only read less than 20 chapters and had to stop and vent. The FL is really annoying. She complains and whines nonstop about how wicked the stepmother is but does nothing for herself. I wanted to see some face slapping, but was utterly disappointed. Is this supposed to be the FL gets her revenge after she finds someone who is strong to back her up? In that case, I can skip.

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