Review Detail of Hannah_King_6215 in A World Where Women Are the Rulers

First off people forget not all of us professionals, but that can be remedied with learning along the way. I also like it when the MC has nice names so Chase alone is a plus for me. I would suggest shorter sentences which I am always told is better *advice from my proofreader* I notice a lot of times the reader might be confused because we don't see their emotion being read just their dialogue readout which is the most jarring part for me. My immersion isn't complete though. I hope the author takes more time to study other books and continue to grow with their work, but there is always time.