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WaifuWithABomb
WaifuWithABombLv121yr
2023-07-25 01:53

writing quality is bad, grammar mistakes everywherd, typing mistakes everywhere, slow paced, the romance is lame, i mean who let a guy kiss her just because she doesn't wants to hurt him saying that if she reject his kiss it will hurt him does that mean she will let everyone kiss her?, the interaction between characters is also lame, just like them typical low quality chinese novel, and also is there anyone call someone 'baby' or 'babe' when you guys are not in a relationship? because that's how the FL address her supossed friend. the FL is dense asf, it's so f-in annoying, world background is nonexistent, *sigh* what is the author thinking...... really the romance so lameeeeeeeeeeeeeee

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BaeVida
4.8
599 Chs

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WaifuWithABomb
WaifuWithABombLv12

ah, im so disappointed in you for make the move of her kissing another dude infront of our ML. ik she does it because she was drunk and her brain played a trick of her making her think of the guy in front of her was the ML. but for storywise it's really so not fun anymore, can't we be more creative?, this misunderstanding trope is just plain stupid at this point. *sigh*

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Self-review from the author here! Thanks for giving this book a try even though it feels niche. For starters, I plan on making this book different from my other one. And that is to say, not a weak fl, naughty and fierce handsome ml that would protect his woman well and help her reach for the stars. A bit of slow burn but trust me, it would be everything and once ml and fl build-up, well lots of crazy... Lots of fluff and the real deal. Also do not expect the perfect couple, no one is perfect in life and in as much as it is fiction, I try to show you real-life relatable situations. Characters have their growth and their mistakes. They may be brilliant and rich but they are humans too. Secondly, please I am not perfect with writing in terms of grammatical errors but unlike my other books, I plan to make this better. *If you can edit and are willing to help me out, I would be glad.* So please do not expect perfect work but rather love the story I am trying to tell. Please I love comments, paragraph and chapter comments and reviews. Love my book, and do not hesitate to leave them, I would try my best to respond to all. Constructive criticisms are welcome. But please no trashy comments, insulting me as an author or even my characters because every one of them has roles to play and we as authors are humans and we have feelings, please respect that. As for the length of the novel, I am not so sure since I am just starting. That being said, I would try my best to give you an interesting story. All I ask is your support along the way and votes. Lastly, if you are reading this book anywhere not on webnovel or Chereads, it's stolen. Please support me and read from webnovel. Thank you. Anticipate, revenge, showbiz, fashion, CEO, Fiestyfl, Billionaire, DotingCEO, secrets and romance.

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BaeVida has already shown her writing abilities several times. She has ability to make engaging and interesting stories in masterful manner and I can say that this book is another masterpiece at making. Good luck for WSA 2022 <3

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