The grammar is good. The story is one of the best Dc fanfic I would've read to date. You keeps the story interesting and not merely plagiarized the Dc comics or movies also your confront the system ideology and how the "hero" of Dc do their jobs. While of this those are the great one thing that I find with the story although you say this story is the slow-paced the Mc as plethora of skills and powers so much so i feel you are not utilizing them fully. He still feels like the same person to me. All in all its a good read and I'm excited to see where the story goes. Also either get this dude a girlfriend or get him some. It's Gotham for God's sake.
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